LADY IN RED- #3 (Last Part)

18 thoughts on “LADY IN RED- #3 (Last Part)”

  1. I’m glad that I waited long enough to read all of that in one go. Really amazing read, Jensy and a great way to go. The ballerina, her moves and the passion in the love…. just each frame is so beautiful I had it playing slowly in my head. Great.

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  2. Beautifully crafted I would say. Till the end, the suspense remained. I loved the way it kept one hooked on to it till the end. Excellent effort!

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  3. The best and the perfect so far! you created the character beautifully through dance and allowed the readers to drown in the beauty of hers,meanwhile transforming and changing the colours ,you played tricks which no one could guess. The whole piece is a great combination of love,dance and the revenge shown. A dance drama in short.

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    1. Yes it is love, dance and revenge! 😉

      Isn’t that more powerful when a woman could bring it.. 😀

      Thank you so much! 🙂

      Happy you liked it 🙂 🙂

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  4. this one was by far your best. you showed control and power of a woman’s mind. I was able to feel the craving of her body as the two became together. expressing feelings so readers can understand or relate to is the key to writing in my opinion. Very good work!!!!

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    1. Thank you Terry 🙂 🙂 So nice of you to consider my request 🙂 And able to understand what was practically in my head to lay it down on paper in words. Thank you so much 🙂

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  5. Jensy… you are an unbelievable talent. What command you have for words of power, words of passion, words of love, words of desire, all carefully crafted and woven tightly together where you lead your reader into the depths of human emotion. Thank you!!!

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  6. This is really astounding and a wonderful talent you got there Jensy ! Proper usage of words with undemanding points . Really keep up the good work 🙂

    Awaiting next .. Take care

    Alex MV

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